Hi there, my name is Olivia and I am a student in Kauri at Yaldhurst School. I really like your sentences poem. It made me think of the real movie and and how you described Dory and the pictures are cute and cool too. . Have you thought about adding more writing to it than pictures .This is good work.
Hi sandra I am Isabella from papakura-central-school what I like about your slide is the words that you used was aswsome because you described how she felt and what she was doing .by Isabella
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Olivia and I am a student in Kauri at Yaldhurst School. I really like your sentences poem. It made me think of the real movie and and how you described Dory and the pictures are cute and cool too. . Have you thought about adding more writing to it than pictures .This is good work.
Thanks For the advice Olivia next i'll Put more writing in it next time i'll go on your blog next time but really thanks for the advice By Sandra
ReplyDeleteOh I for got to tell you My name is Sandra i am nine years old I am a year 5 and i am from papakura central school
ReplyDeleteHi sandra I am Isabella from papakura-central-school what I like about your slide is the words that you used was aswsome because you described how she felt and what she was doing .by Isabella
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